Audience Feedback

Through my audience feedback i saw that my strengths were my idea was clear, understandable and straight forward. Also it relates to my target audience as well so it should keep them interested. I saw that my weaknesses were i need to develop more on my idea as some people were confused. So i decided to change the location of my advert to a bedroom instead of a school where the audience can engage more. Lastly i should have put some images to help the audience visualise my idea.